literature

Commission - Asphodel's Kissing Booth (SBO)

Deviation Actions

cajobif's avatar
By
Published:
309 Views

Literature Text

WATCH THIS FIRST: foxy-noxy.deviantart.com/art/C…
Note: I didn't get any infos about this OC.

Asphodel: *sigh* My mom was right. It doesn't work when you don't change. And with these sexy mares over there who got all the attention, no wonder I can't even give one single kiss. Even for free...
Pony: I could kiss you.
A: Woah!!! Huh? W-where you coming from...?
P: I was over there *pointing with his hoof*. I saw you and you seemed so sad...
A: I-I'm not sad! I-I'm tired! I had a long day...
P: That's why you are sad?
A: I'M NOT SAD!!!!
P: Okay! Okay! I got it.
A: Hmph!
P: So?
A: So... what?
P: Can I... kiss you?
A: Huh?
P: Why so surprised? Aren't you a kissing booth? And for free on that mat-
A: I GIVE THE KISSES! NOT YOU!
P: Woah! No wonder nopony want to- *begin to trot away*
A: NO! WAIT!!!! *the pony stopped and turned his head to look in her direction* I....
P: Are you decided?
A: I... *sigh* You are right. C-come closer... *he trotted and stopped in front of the booth*
P: So... How it works?
A: *sigh* You ask for a kiss and I give you one...
P: Okay. Seems quite simple....
A: ... on the cheek.
P: What? No way!
A: What do you mean 'no way'?
P: No wonder nopony want your kisses! Only aunts and mothers give kisses on the cheek! Not single mares!
A: Are you telling me you want one on the l- What do you mean by single mare!!! What makes you think I'm single?
P: I don't see any colt or stallion here getting jealous because of this business of your....
A: Uh... Point taken. But I won't kiss you on the lips!
P: Okay. Suits yourself. I'm sure these mares over there will... *point the other booth with his hoof*
A: NO! WAIT!
P: Oh?
A: They kissed so many ponies today, you may end with a disease or an infection... or... something else awful...
P: *smiles*
A: *frowns* You like tormenting me don't you?
P: No. Not really. *she facepan him* What? I swear! I... I just want... I just want a kiss... I... never... been kissed....by anypony...
A: Huh?!? But you look so...
P: *chuckles* Right. And I saw your booth... I saw you putting it this morning... a smile on your face... so willing and happy... Then... you got this... sad... It made me sad...
A: Are you... pitying me?
P: NO!!! Err.... I mean... No. Not at all. I... just want you to have at least one customer today... That's all. *smiles*
A: You r-really mean it?
P: Y-yeah. I don't see why others didn't came to you. C-cute as you are... *she blushed* Err... I mean... I watched at you all day and couldn't stop...
She grab him with her holed hooves on his each sides of his face and put a quick kiss on his lips. Shocked, he looked at her with wide eyes, while she smiled at him, still holding him between her hooves.
A: Here's your free kiss, mister. *smiles* Enjoyed it?
P: *blush* Uh... Y-yeah?
A: Good. Because... this one... is on me....
She brought him closer with her hooves and kissed him passionly and lovingly on his lips. He froze, this instant, caught entirely by surprise. But with the seconds passing and the kissing continuing, he softened and returned it, grabing her with his own hooves, her own around him. This loving moment caught the attention of the neighboring booth with the mares and its customers who were witnessing this unexpected scene with dropped jaws and surprised stares. This gone on for a minute... two minutes... then after three long minutes... They broke the kiss, both panting.
P: *heavy breathing* Wow!
A: *heavy breathing* Y-yeah...
P: *he gulped air* D-do you give... "specials"... like this to your.... *he breathed* other customers?
A: *she grinned* Only... to the one I fell I love with...
P: Oh! Okay. That explains.... W-what?!?
A: *she giggled* Why surprised? I looked at you all day, too. I waited that you come here. At least once. And when you told you I was cute.... I....
Other colts arrived at the booths, after their lovely show.
Colt: S'cuse me? Do you really give free kisses like this to all your customers?!?
A: Nah! I'm closed, now!
Colt: What? Are you sure? I could pay for one like you gave him! Two bits! No... five bits!!!
A: Hahahaha!
Colt: Huh?
A: Your bits won't be able to buy something I really wanted.
Colt: W-what is it?
She looked at this pony she kissed so lovingly, with a wide smile.
A: Somepony to love.
He smiled, while she trotted around her booth and joined him to hug him. Before turning her head to the kissing mares who were looking at her and she shouted at them.
A: Hey, girls! You can have it! *she turned her head in the direction of her new coltfriend* I won't need it anymore.
They left the scene under the incredulous eyes of stallions and mares, trotting away, a smile on each other's face, close to each others with one of her wings put tenderly his back.
P: And I just wanted a kiss... I never expected a marefriend...
A: *she giggled* Shush! You...
P: Why didn't you keep your booth anyway?
A: For not making you jealous. *she grinned*
P: *he blushed* T-thanks!
WATCH THIS FIRST: foxy-noxy.deviantart.com/art/C…

Shot story based on this drawing. Don't forget to comment the artist of the artwork piece.
© 2014 - 2024 cajobif
Comments3
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Tydra759's avatar
not bad, its great ^^